The Lottery
By Shirley Jackson
The children assembled first, of course. School was recently over for the summer,
and the
feeling of liberty sat uneasily on most of them; they tended to gather together quietly
for a while before they broke into boisterous play. and their talk was still of the
classroom and the teacher, of books and reprimands. Bobby Martin had already stuffed his
pockets full of stones, and the other boys soon followed his example, selecting the
smoothest and roundest stones;
Question: Why were stones being collected, and why were the smoothest and roundest stones favored? Bobby and Harry Jones and Dickie Delacroix-- the
villagers pronounced this name "Dellacroy"--eventually made a great pile of stones
in
one corner of the square and guarded it against the raids of the other boys. The girls
stood aside, talking among themselves, looking over their shoulders at rolled in the
dust or clung to the hands of their older brothers or sisters.
Soon the men began to gather. surveying their own children, speaking of planting and
rain, tractors and taxes. They stood together, away from the pile of stones in the
corner, and their jokes were quiet and they smiled rather than laughed. The women,
wearing faded house dresses and sweaters, came shortly after their menfolk. They greeted
one another and exchanged bits of gossip as they went to join their husbands.
Restory: The women, wearing leather jackets, skinny jeans, and heels arrived to the square
greeting each other, eventually meeting up with their husbands. Soon the
women, standing by their husbands, began to call to their children, and the children
came reluctantly, having to be called four or five times. Bobby Martin ducked under
his
mother's grasping hand and ran, laughing, back to the pile of stones
Replace: weapons. His father spoke
up sharply, and Bobby came quickly and took his place between his father and his oldest
brother.
The lottery was conducted--as were the square dances, the teen club, the Halloween
program--by Mr. Summers. who had time and energy to devote to civic activities. He was a
round-faced, jovial man and he ran the coal business, and people were sorry for him.
because he had no children and his wife was a scold.
Restory: He had a defined jaw line and owned multiple companies, people looked up to him because
of his massive success and beautiful wife. When he arrived in the square,
carrying the black wooden box, there was a murmur of conversation among the villagers,
and he waved and called. "Little late today, folks." The postmaster, Mr. Graves,
followed him, carrying a three- legged stool, and the stool was put in the center
of the
square and Mr. Summers set the black box down on it. The villagers kept their distance,
leaving a space between themselves and the stool. and when Mr. Summers said, "Some
of
you fellows want to give me a hand?" there was a hesitation before two men. Mr. Martin
and his oldest son, Baxter. came forward to hold the box steady on the stool while
Mr.
Summers stirred up the papers inside it.
The original paraphernalia for the lottery had been lost long ago, and the black
box now
resting on the stool had been put into use even before Old Man Warner, the oldest
man in
town, was born.
Close Read: The author clearly uses this sentence to put in perspective just how old this tradition
really is, the original content is not even used anymore. Mr. Summers spoke frequently to the villagers about making a new box,
but no one liked to upset even as much tradition as was represented by the black box.
There was a story that the present box had been made with some pieces of the box that
had preceded it, the one that had been constructed when the first people settled down
to
make a village here. Every year, after the lottery, Mr. Summers began talking again
about a new box, but every year the subject was allowed to fade off without anything's
being done. The black box grew shabbier each year: by now it was no longer completely
black but splintered badly along one side to show the original wood color, and in
some
places faded or stained.
Expansion: Similar to the black box, the villagers who fell victim to the box were also left
splintered and faded.